KIKI ARISTIYA MN
201010100311050
A Man and the Accident
I will tell you about a man who got trouble several times because of his behavior. He has bad behavior because he did something without sincerity. The first trouble or accident he got because of it was when he gave some speech to the audiences very proudly, but he asked to them some money although, the audiences appreciated his speech; after that, he got accident with fall into a hole in the stage. Moreover, ambulance brought him to the hospital, but in the way the ambulance shook and made him feel pain. However, the suffering was not over. After he came to the hospital, he got very bad service from nurses; when she checked his temperature was very strict, a men who cleaned his body with rudely, and when he was got sleep, there was old nurse came and surprised him. Furthermore, the last accident was too bad for him. He got injection from the doctor too deep and strict. That was all of the accident he got. So that, do not being person whom did something without sincerity if we do not want gets something badly.
KIKI ARISTIYA MN
201010100311050
Missing Hometown
This paragraph tells about some woman who miss their hometown and they give some describes of it. the first is woman from Belfast. Her name is Alison, she live there since 1994 for eighteen years. She said that in Belfast she can visit a place which Titanic was built and a Clock Tower. Moreover, she has warm family whom she was loved in there. The second woman is Jenifer. She was come from Erie, USA. She lived for seventeen years in there. She said that in Erie, she has good friends and weather in there is always changes; warm, hot in summer, and snows in October- March. The third woman is Kathleen. She came from Trinidad, Caribbean. She spent all of her childhood and teenage in that place. She said that the weather in there was so hot, also she like outdoor place in Trinidad like swimming, driving, and snorkeling. One day, she wants to go back there, a place which she missed. The last woman is Astrid who came from Perth, Australia. She spent all of her life in there until 2002. She love sun shine in the beach and she miss the weather which was too hot. She loved and missed the entire place in Perth. She said that she want to go back to the place which she grew up. All of them were missed their place. So that, they want to go to back to their first place, hometown.
KIKI ARISTIYA MN
201010100311050
Topic : Rose
Topic sentences : Rose is beautiful flower which has many kind and meaning in every kind itself.
Controlling idea: Has many kind and meaning
List of supporting idea:
· Rose has divided into several big groups
· Many kind of colors of it
· Every colors has different meaning
Concluding sentences : Finally, we know that rose is flower which has many kind and meaning in every color, and it is not only flower which has thorn, but also has many kinds of color and different meaning in it.
Transitional signal : In common, moreover, furthermore, exactly, finally
Types of paragraph: Descriptive
Rose is beautiful flower which has many kind and meaning in every kind itself. In common, rose has divided into several big groups; Wild rose, Old garden roses, Climbing roses, Shrub roses, Modern garden roses, Buck roses, English roses, and Miniature roses. The first is wild rose with grow as wild plant and in everywhere; simple, and has known long time ago. Second is old garden roses, which has got from crossing; moreover, this type of rose is very unique and aromatic. Old garden roses has divided into several kind; Alba, Gallica, Damask, Centifolia, China, Bourbon, Tea, and Bermuda ’mysterious’ roses. Alba, sometimes called white rose, came from British. Gallacia is rose came from Europe. Damask is rose came from Persia, Centifola is came from England, China is rose which came from Europe and brings to China with can bloom several times a year, Bourbon is rose came from French and in a year it can bloom many times. Tea, this kind of rose is same as China and Bourbon, it can bloom several times and sometimes the smell is like tea. Bermuda ‘mysterious’ roses is rose which has high economics value and grow in tropic and subtopic area. The third is Climbing Roses; like the name, this rose grows with climbing in fence or other places. Fourth is Shrub roses, with has small sepal and grow like Climbing Roses. Fifth is Modern garden roses, there are two types of it. It is Hybrid Tea and Floribunda. The flower of Hybrid Tea is big and sometimes, it use in wedding ceremony with put it in Tuxedo. Floribunda, it has small flower and the color is very strong. Sixth is Buck Roses and this type of rose is very strong in every disease and winter. Seventh is English Roses. This rose is very aromatic and bloom several times. From those kind of roses, she have many kind of colors like red rose, white rose, pink rose, yellow rose, black rose, green rose, blue rose, purple rose, peach rose, and orange rose. Furthermore, every color of rose has different meaning like Red rose, use for expressing love, beauty, romantics and etcetera. This rose often assume as respecting in high level. White rose use as symbol of true love and purity. Exactly, it is suitable give to friends and soul mate. Pink rose is suitable give to friends and family as a respecting to them, and it is symbol of happiness, respecting, and softness. Yellow rose is symbol of friendship, happiness, and others. Sometimes, it is as a flexibility and freedom. Black rose use to express hate, Green rose is harmony color, prosperous, and prosperity. Blue rose assume as imagination, mystery, and feeling that hard to express. Purple rose is symbol of beauty, unique, and perfectness of desire. This rose also use to express fall in love in first deep. Peach rose is symbol of warmth in relations. The last is orange rose, and this is symbol of spirit of someone. Finally, we know that rose is flower which has many kind and meaning in every color, and it is not only flower which has thorn, but also has many kinds of color and in it.
KIKI ARISTIYA MN
20101010031050
Topic : the changes and differences
Topic sentence : Unbelievable, seven years is passing quickly and apparently, the differences now and seven years ago is far enough.
Controlling idea : now and seven years ago is far enough.
List of supporting idea:
· junior high school now and seven years ago
· Bicycle and motorcycle
· Hand phone
· The changes are very extremes
Concluding sentence : So, what will happen in seven years later, with increase of the technology, would bicycle become fly cycle and hand phone which now have touch screen will be anything amaze with increase the ideas and people want. Would it be something new and make differences between past, now, and next!
Transitional signal : wherever
Types of paragraph : Comparative / comparison
Unbelievable, seven years is pass quickly and apparently, the differences now and seven years ago is far enough. Take example from students of junior high school now and seven years ago; from ethnic era to modern era, from bicycle to motorcycle, and from paper to screen era, and many others. Feel, time is passing too quickly with those differences because of the changes of time and sophisticated technology. As an adult now, remember when we as junior high school students, come and leave school together with friends, joking around at street, and of course it still ride our lovely vehicle that is bicycle. Seven years ago, we know that junior high school students are not allowed ride motorcycle to go to school. Parking area full of student’s bicycle, there is no motorcycle in it except teacher’s motorcycle; but that were over years ago. Now, all of parking area fulfill of student’s motorcycle. With changes of era, bicycle change to motorcycle. When ride bicycle they can joking around the street, but when they ride motorcycle, they just enjoy their self with speed of machine. That is the differences now and seven years ago. Seven years ago, school was not allowed their students ride motorbike to school, now they allowed it because, the era has change. Remember, there are some students having hand phone and it still not allow bring or use in school, if they bring, they will get punishment or teacher will take their hand phone. How about now? Wherever we stare, we will find it. In class, cafeteria, yard, bathroom, and toilet wherever we are, we will find it. Even, they use their money to buy pulse not beverage or food. They will focus on their screen; press any button on their gadget. This is just some differences from many differences we can see. The differences are truly and have influence in student’s life. Life is almost circle and never stops, make people follow without any awareness. Now and seven years ago, the changes are very extremes, the time always go forward and anything will change. So, what will happen in seven years later, with increase of the technology, would bicycle become fly cycle and hand phone which now have touch screen will be anything amaze with increase the ideas and people want. Would it be something new and make differences between past, now, and next!
KIKI ARISTIYA MN
201010100311050
Because of midday napping…
Topic : The advantages of take a nap
Topic sentence : Usually we are underestimating while we sleep in midday or take a nap; however, we did not know that there are many advantages because of taking a nap
Controlling idea : there are many advantages because of taking a nap
List of supporting idea: 1. would get many advantages
2. Most people believe they will get any disease of it
3. People who got trouble because of take a nap
4. Take a nap has ideal portion
5. Some research and survey
Concluding sentence : Then, we know that we get positive effect and get many advantages with do something simply and easily, it is taking a nap. With those evident, hope we will do these simple kind with would cause many advantage and good effect for body and mind.
Transition signal : however, moreover, actually, then,
Type of paragraph : cause and effect
Usually we are underestimating while we sleep in midday or take a nap; however, we did not know that there are many advantages because of taking a nap. Many researcher said that we would get many advantage like decrease stress, increase creativity, increasing healthy, decrease hypertension, body will fresh, increase brain system, and others; that is all because of taking a nap. Most people believe that they will get any disease or disadvantage like the body feel faint, dizzy; moreover, there are opinion of some people, if they take a nap, they will lose their gold time which they have. People who got trouble or disadvantages because of sleep in midday, like someone who work in office; actually, they did not realize something bad will be waiting for them. If they take a nap, it will make their mind and body feel comfort, fresh, and relax. Then, people who love take a nap, they should not forget, if midday napping has ideal portion. It means that we are not allowed to take a nap anytime we want. The ideal portion or timing of it considers 30 - 45 minutes. It is no more than one hours and it could made our body better and will rest our mind for second for begin to use. Do not pass the right portion because, it would make the body painful and sometimes it will be insomnia because, you will get trouble in your sleep in the night. Sara C. Mednick, PhD from University of California, America said, indeed 20 minutes of take a nap is enough for refreshing nerve system and increasing motoric system. There is some research and survey did in Collage with full time learning observed with give treatment in two classes which one class give treatment with sleep in midday, and one class did not give any treatment. They still have their lesson until the night. Unwillingness, that class with give treatment, they still keep spirit to their lesson, but a class that did not give any treatment, they has tired and did not concentrate with their learning anymore. It is one of the reasons why take a nap is influence our body also our mind. Then, we know that we get positive effect and get many advantages with do something simply and easily, it is taking a nap. With those evident, hope we will do these simple kind with would cause many advantage and good effect for body and mind.
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